After getting feedback from the class and Rebecca, we have found many things that went well with our pitch, and some things that may need improving.
Positives:
- Target audience was clear
- Extensive research was excellent
- Costume was really clear and suited the genre/artist
- Wide variety of ICT and websites were used for our pitch
Could do better if:
- Less locations (we have too many)
- Have two boys instead of one or else it might be too confusing
- Animatic needs to be faster (editing)
What to improve now:
- Cut down on locations because most of it will be close-ups so we won't be able to see it anyway
- Use another male for our music video
