Positive feedback included:
- Excellent descriptive audience research.
- Great costume research, clear who our target audience is.
- A huge range of ICT and technology used in our pitch.
- Our idea and concept are very clear and easy to understand.
- Our music video inspirations are well explained.
Criticisms included:
- Having one boy play the good and bad boy would confuse the audience. There should be a clear distinction between the good and bad boy which would convey the song better.
- Too many choices of locations, it isn't clear what locations are going to be used and on what days.
- Editing on our animatic should be faster as the beat is very fast.
In light of the feedback...
- We are going to find another guy to use in our video or just use one guy to play one character and not both. This will help our audience to understand the song better.
- We will narrow down our location choices and make it clear why we have chosen specific locations, and decide when we will shoot in certain locations.
- In our promotional music video for Dirty Love we will make sure to use markers on the right beats so the edit is faster. Therefore the song would be edited to the beat and match up.
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